Black Poetry : SMOKE SCREAM & ME

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I've took this look
    deep in da mirror
    what do i see
    something fake
    this isn't me
    pain, suffering
    lies and hate
    this i know isn't
    my fate
    where has that
    smile gone too
    the one when i
    glair deep into u
    the excitement
    the thrill of da
    chase
    something very
    different has now
    taken place
    one day maybe
    i'll know
    but for now
    i gotta go
    coz i've stumble
    through this all
    technicolor fantasy
    playing so many parts
    lost my will inching my
    way on countless dream
    nameless game it seem
    but my heart say it's da
    real thing dat drift on to
    infinity
    if u see me out and about
    stop holla , scream & shout
    i may turn and look to see
    who this screammin at me
    i may walk by coz
    yet powerless to end a desire
    a fire dat burns a moment to
    share walking in a maze
    Nameless game controlled
    follies & schemes
    leave me lost alone cold
    so it's time i roll with my
    questions abound , unheard
    and never felt i see da end
    at the sand dune swimming
    in da depth of tears drowning
    from the absorb colors of dis
    destiny challenge and live
    through these wasted years
    it do not really matter now
    it's all a dream , but whose?
    mines or yours
    it's up to me now to out scream
    the demons , to defy , to choose
    know i didn't give up
    just gave in !

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    very deep...another mental crusher...
    relax release all will pass in time
    but for now pray....very deep
    sorta speechless i be back in :spinstar:

    peace
    angel
     
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    that's deep
    feel where u comin' from
     
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    see when da mind is crossed into smoke
    da far holla and cry become da pain of screams
    the only one u see is self in da mirror thankz Angel

    sometime what we see is not real but it leave a greater
    deeper scare u know thankz for feeling me my mind rumbling
    on the limb alone ....thankz sweet baby face.
     
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    indeed time for being true to ones self
    for the scare may go deep but within God
    all answers lays...sometime I know
    that smokey cloud comes and
    all you can do is look in da mirror....
    love the meaning of this scribe...speak on...Angel
     
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    indeed blind man standing on da corner
    thankz for the wordz
     
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    I can truly agree with you their bruh. Keep the fire comeing.
     
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    much thankz for feeling this smoky joe !
     
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    but y'all don't hear me ! !
    so i'll come back to ride one last time .
     
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    like a retreat into ones self..taking time and looking at the steps you made and the path your going..as before a very deep mental crushing piece....
    flow head on....love this part of you...Angel
     
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