Black Poetry : Smoke Rings

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl you like it
    Can't do without it

    Don't even trip
    Licking your lips

    Wishing well gift
    Giving you fits

    Blind date so fine
    Baby you're mine

    Have a good time
    Blowing my mind

    Your overhaul...
    Climbing the walls

    Coming to Earth
    For all its worth

    Your fantasies
    Keeping it real

    Sex you can feel
    His sex appeal

    This love is king
    Watch these smoke rings ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :hearts2:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    Leaving her smoking. Well after the love is over. Like a cigarette being smoked after you finish and leave the room. She still has smoke rings. You told her not to trip, she loving it. She licked her lips.

    I like this 1Poet
     
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    1poetsought-Loved the beat. Loved the rhythm and the message. HH
     
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    Where Kings relate there is no debate!

    Always liked you Harry, having dug your work.

    BRO. HODEE, blessed in the presence of such company.
     
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    I can see the smoke now...lol...this was a real suave piece..."KEEP EM COMIN"...1
     
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    Seems as though you have her on fire as it were....Flow on poet, your pen is ablaze.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u pen the rapture of it all here love the flow
     
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    Smoke gets in 1's eyes ~

    Ever so grateful family!
     
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