Black Poetry : Smoke (on Bishop's Satin Sheets)

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: Every morning when I wake
    :hot: There is a fine misty film all around me
    :hot: Like smoke
    :hot: Steam rises
    :hot: From my body
    :hot: Cause the night before I burned
    :hot: Like flames
    :hot: The heat was so intense
    :hot: That I have scorch marks between my thighs
    :hot: As he does
    :hot: On his lips.
    :hot: Every morning
    :hot: As I raise my pleasantly sore
    :hot: Body from the Love nest
    :hot: I remember the spark
    :hot: That ignited the flames
    :hot: The whisper of a touch
    :hot: The wetness of the lick
    :hot:The smoothness of the entry.
    :hot: Every evening
    :hot: As we lay
    :hot: Just as the smoke is clearing
    :hot: We ignite the spark
    :hot: That leaves behind the smoke

    Natasha :heart:
    :hot:
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew!

    scorch marks between thighs and on lips....yes ma'am! Say that schiznit!


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  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    UMMMMMM!! HUMMMM!

    YA FLOWIN! TOO SWEET
    LAY DA BODY DOWN BABY!!:toast:
     
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    still wet from the oil of pleasure
    My match ignites the spark
    that consumes us in Passion fire
    Bathing us in fiery extasy
    purifying this intercourse of love
    bodies sore
    yet we cry out for more
    for the fire strengthens us
    thighs glowing red hot
    searing my flesh as I enter in
    welding us together
    intensity of the heat unbearable
    yet it pales in comparison to the pleasures experienced
    spontaneous combustion
    as we explode
    in unison
    extinguishing the flames that licks our flesh
    as we savor this moment of rest before we begin again.
     
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    HOT LIKE FIRE!!!!

    :hot: Do i want to come up in here!!! I ain't trying to get burned.... but yalls be dha bomb... And got me feenin fo mo!!!!
     
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    nice

    Nice piece itis so refreshing to hear a woman relive the heat of the night before as if it was real as it is . Take care and keep you words alive. :wave:
     
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    indeed the hot sheets
    whoaaaaaa again i'm hit by this drop
     
  8. krazelyricks

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    Hey this was tyte......keep this thing goin'.........ya'll got me over here in suspensewaitin' for the next verse.........bring it.....
     
  9. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet Sensuous Scibe...

    Write On!
     
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    wow this is yes:hot: and more..nice one here
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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