Black Poetry : Smoke (on Bishop's Satin Sheets)

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blob fire: Every morning when I wake
    :blob fire: There is a fine misty film all around me
    :blob fire: Like smoke
    :blob fire: Steam rises
    :blob fire: From my body
    :blob fire: Cause the night before I burned
    :blob fire: Like flames
    :blob fire: The heat was so intense
    :blob fire: That I have scorch marks between my thighs
    :blob fire: As he does
    :blob fire: On his lips.
    :blob fire: Every morning
    :blob fire: As I raise my pleasantly sore
    :blob fire: Body from the Love nest
    :blob fire: I remember the spark
    :blob fire: That ignited the flames
    :blob fire: The whisper of a touch
    :blob fire: The wetness of the lick
    :blob fire:The smoothness of the entry.
    :blob fire: Every evening
    :blob fire: As we lay
    :blob fire: Just as the smoke is clearing
    :blob fire: We ignite the spark
    :blob fire: That leaves behind the smoke

    Natasha :heart:
    :blob fire:
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew!

    scorch marks between thighs and on lips....yes ma'am! Say that schiznit!


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  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    UMMMMMM!! HUMMMM!

    YA FLOWIN! TOO SWEET
    LAY DA BODY DOWN BABY!!:toast:
     
  4. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    still wet from the oil of pleasure
    My match ignites the spark
    that consumes us in Passion fire
    Bathing us in fiery extasy
    purifying this intercourse of love
    bodies sore
    yet we cry out for more
    for the fire strengthens us
    thighs glowing red hot
    searing my flesh as I enter in
    welding us together
    intensity of the heat unbearable
    yet it pales in comparison to the pleasures experienced
    spontaneous combustion
    as we explode
    in unison
    extinguishing the flames that licks our flesh
    as we savor this moment of rest before we begin again.
     
  5. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOT LIKE FIRE!!!!

    :blob fire: Do i want to come up in here!!! I ain't trying to get burned.... but yalls be dha bomb... And got me feenin fo mo!!!!
     
  6. oraiders11

    oraiders11 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice

    Nice piece itis so refreshing to hear a woman relive the heat of the night before as if it was real as it is . Take care and keep you words alive. :wave:
     
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    indeed the hot sheets
    whoaaaaaa again i'm hit by this drop
     
  8. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey this was tyte......keep this thing goin'.........ya'll got me over here in suspensewaitin' for the next verse.........bring it.....
     
  9. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet Sensuous Scibe...

    Write On!
     
  10. Bluewater

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    wow this is yes:blob fire: and more..nice one here
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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