Black Poetry : Smitten

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Apr 17, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet
    can only
    describe
    the time
    I spend with
    you.
    I yearn
    for any moment
    you can give me.
    I long to hold
    and caress and
    to just be
    with you.
    Seems the hours
    get away
    too quickly.
    I feel
    like I am
    14 again
    and you are
    my crush.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes this was sweet feelin
    of that 14 years old first love
    crush makes ya blind and lose time
    just wanting him near feelin his touch
    wishing the next time you look
    in his eye aint to far away from the last time....
    well i went some where wit this one
    thanks for sharing...i know this feeling
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime i can feel u
    near my heart and it's
    like ya heart beckoning
    me in to a caressin warmth
    i feel like the cuddling souls
    are holding us together
    and like my high school
    sweetheart dancin in a
    romantic groove
    all i lone was to love u
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, infatuation can snatch you up and take you for a ride, but it's a nice trip while it lasts. This was sweetly laid.