Black Poetry : Smiling

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He said he loved my eyes
    They made his soul sing.
    He said he loved to stare into them and read my inner thoughts
    He said he loved my lips
    They made his pulse race
    Because they conjured up thoughts of passion he had yet to explore.
    He said he loved my smile
    It made his heart melt.
    In it he saw all the tomorrows and forever’s he dared dream of.
    He told me all the things that made me melt
    and now Im Smiling all over.
     
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    So sweet!

    Awwww! He knew all the right words to say!

    Got you all giggly like a school-girl! Aint nuthin wrong with it!

    Bask and glow!
     
  3. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love as always.
    I am always appreciative of feed back.
    Smiling all over is just a beautiful feeling. :em0100:
     
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    This is a Wonderful flow Thatgirl74:terrific:
    You spoke of lips he longed to kiss
    Beautiful eyes that leads to the soul
    Then after you smiled he melted as well
    The touching of two lovely souls.

    Thank You for this flow it is so true
    So inspirational to know and it does exist
    That someone adores someone like this.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww thank you for the love.
    And thank you for the feedback
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da love within and da smile of joy from love he said and i know so keep smiling sis.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You as always $$R$$
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise sis much love @ cha
     
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    Hearing something so sweet would make me smile all over as well. Welcome back poetess. :)
     
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    and i am smiling after read such a sweet and exquiste piece
     
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