Black Poetry : SMILE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweettee29, Aug 26, 2006.

  1. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for reading while it was posted
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Keep smiling forth the gift of he is of you and he also smile

    let it all flow out and continue to feel the new you like i do.
     
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    sweettee:
    This is really a deep scribe. The good thing is that you
    have not let all that madness break you and tear you
    down. Sista you continue to stay strong and keep smiling:)

    Much luv
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU $$RICH$$ & 4EVERLUV FOR YALL'S LOVE AND SUPPORT I HAVE TO SMILE GOD BLESSES ME EVERYDAY EVEN THROUGH ALL OF MY TRIALS AND TRIBULATIONS GOD HAS A PLAN FOR MYSELF AND MY CHILDREN I HAVE AN ULTIMATE FAITH IN THAT

    SWEETTEE29, love
     
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    under the light of faith surely your be alright as well the children
    stay strong sista queen
     
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    beautiful piece poet
    nice and deep
    lots of that anf emotions
    keep writing your feelings
    8/10
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ I WILL DEFINATLY STAY STRONG
    AND TANTRUM THANKS FOR CHECKING THIS PIECE OUT

    SWEETTEE29, LOVE
     
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    Nicely writen, I like the power in it that you give yourself. Everytime something is messed up you replaid with "I will smile" just dope....

    Mannie
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    THANK YOU DEFIANTSON I APPREICATE YOU CHECKIN THIS PIECE OUT I HAVE TO SMILE THATS HOW I GOT THROUGH ALL THE RAIN AND FELT THE SUNSHINE OF TOMORROW

    SWEETTEE, LOVE
     
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    is this a spoken word piece?

    if not it should be

    i loved your strength

    yes keep rising
    to the top
    don't let it get you down

    you've been thru alot
    but you've gain strength and not sorrow
    and i love it
    poet

    peace
     
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