Black Poetry : SMILE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mistaliberator, May 26, 2004.

  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TODAY
    I WITNESS YOUR BEAUTY
    LIVE FROM
    THE
    DEPTHS OF MY SOUL
    UNREHEARSED AND NOT YET SOLD
    SEX DOES SELL BUT NOT TO DAY
    I WITNESS YOUR LIFE LIVE FROM THE QUARTERS OF
    CLOSED CAPTION
    TRAPPED DEEP WITHIN THE WALLS OF MY HEART
    AND IT FELT GOOD TO HOLD LIFE ONCE MORE
    REPEATING THESE WORDS
    AND IT FELT GOOD TO HOLD US CLOSE ONCE AGAIN
    SMILE FOR THIS JUST MAY BE PERFECT TIMING
    BUT TO DAY I SMILE FOR THIS GIFT
    TODAY I WITNESS
    THIS GIFT
    AND UPLIFT THIS GIFT
    THIS BEAUTIFUL GIFT
    THIS GIFT SENT DIRECTLY FROM GOD
    LORD KNOWS HEAVEN MUST BE SOMETHING LIKE YOU
    HEAVEN MUST BE BEAUTY
    HEAVEN MUST BE UNHEARD WORDS BORN IN YOUR NAME
    AND LORD KNOWS HEAVEN CANT BE FORSAKEN
    AND
    NOT TO BE TAKEN FOR GRANTED
    BUT
    TO BE TAKEN AS THE TRUTH
    SMILE
    SMILE
    SMILE
    WHEN
    YOU CLOSE YOUR EYES AND REALIZE
    EXACTLY WHAT THIS IS
    SMILE
    FOR US
    SMILE BECAUSE TODAY I WALKED
    OUT
    OF
    THIS
    SORROWFUL
    WORLD
    AND I WALKED IN TO HEAVEN
    SMILE
    BECAUSE TODAY I FOUND THE TRUTH
    IN YOU
    SMILE
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, a person's smile can bring you deep inside the beauty that lies within. Your words certainly made me smile.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love'd this here and how it captures da smile of a soul
     
  4. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet piece. I like how you slowly broke the poem down piece by piece in the middle to the end. Nicely written

    one luv
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smile indeed. You know what I like this a lot. It is the Mista I have come to know!!!!!!!!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It puts a smile in my heart...when someone can put a smile on my face...this one was hot. Thanks for sharing.
     
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