Black Poetry : "..smile"

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lend me some sugar.. l am your neighbor
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    the job
    is not so hard...
    baby,
    smile, charge it to my soulcard...
    l miss those days....
    lf l could go back, l would
    kiss those days you laughed
    with no care...
    like a child with a kite in the air...
    smile :D..
    l know the world is crazy,,
    sky is madd hazy
    but ~you are my ladaaay~ like Freddy Jackson
    l want to undo the mixed reaction
    into a constant, fixed satisfaction :sand:...
    maybe l should dance in my spider-mans
    under red light sequences
    maybe massage you with my hands
    play the gap band
    and tell you that you're outstandin'..
    girl,
    you knock me out when you smile b/c
    it makes my world spinn :spinn:
    and if it's cute enough, l grin with bedroom thoughts :grin:
    don't try to hide it..
    let it out...
    see, you just got caught.
    l made you smile.

    now,poets, everybody, smile!! :spinn: :look: :flirt: :jumping: :peace: :coffee: :toast:
    :yo: :grouphug: :geek: :tongue:
    and then we can :fight: later...
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That hit the spot, because it did make me smile, as I'm sure most will who read this. I guess the poems are a bit on the low side of late, huh? (just to think, my next one was going to be an angry poem....)
     
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    now i am smiling..your lovely poem.has indeed giving me a wonderful highlight filled with delight
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was on the dimples ........on point smiling
     
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    aaaaaaawe...that's my J'hiah...

    hey...just for you

    Get the camera...

    You're about to get the EQUIVALENT of a Million bucks...


    :D



    Much love :heart:
    Refreshing flow...​
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well ya got me smiling
    nice sweet flow
    enjoyed it
    peace
    Angel....
    Now smile........ :kiss:
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :D maybe l'll get a gold front...

    Angelicsage, more like a trillion. waaaayyy much love 4 you.
    (l'll have that real soon, talk later.)
    BlueWater, thank you to the 10th power...
    :lol: $R, "on the dimples" - big respect.
    Mz, you smiling? what? l'm doing a sequel then..
    Watz, *whoa* you leave me searching for words.
    do your thing queen, l'm watching
     
  8. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Dude, :hot:

    It's been awhile. I see your humor is still intact. How have you been. Did you ever get married to you know who? Holla at ah sista. I see the ink is still flowing well as ever. Keep the metaphors coming bro...

    lf l could go back, l would
    kiss those days you laughed
    with no care...
    like a child with a kite in the air...
    smile ..
    l know the world is crazy,,
    sky is madd hazy
    but ~you are my ladaaay~ like Freddy Jackson
    l want to undo the mixed reaction
    into a constant, fixed satisfaction ...
    maybe l should dance in my spider-mans
    under red light sequences


    Joyce
     
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    :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) ...Oh dang, I'm cold busted...ain't I ??? I tried to hold it back, ...I tried hard but it started hurting my insides...so I spilled it... :) :) :) :) :) and I enjoyed reading and smiling it was such a beautiful work of art...it made my day, ...thanks.
     
  10. gempis

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    ooo, this is so nice! esp love the part about the soulcard.
     
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