Black Poetry : small 'i' in 'us'

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there's a small 'i'
    hidden in the crooks and curves
    of the 's' in 'us'
    it's watching 'u'
    and scoping every movement
    the problem is...
    not many people tend to see the 'i'
    in 'us'

    but

    quickly recognize
    the 'they' in 'them'.

    in short:

    "know 'u,' 'i,' and 'us'...then spot 'them'

    (jussalilfood4thought)

    sean
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    nice

    i had to read it thrice...just that good.
    thanx for the mental stim

    hw
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad you could put both hands on the thought

    and FEEL it.

    fa'sho


    sean
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    poet

    i love the abstract
    yet real
    yet deep
    work here poet

    this is one of them
    bombs

    yo poet
    your work is strong
    very very strong

    keep working
    and don't let the bull
    get to you
    it's all just to keep you away from YOU
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja

    i ain't the only one that needs looking after, though i do appreciate that you are looking after ya bruh...got ya back

    sean
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