Black Poetry : Smack me....I am sorry

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit here thinking
    Back on times we
    laughed and cried…
    and the sweet talks
    i do miss them....But
    it came to me that we
    are going thru the same..
    At times I forget
    Consumed in my own
    Sorrow around this
    time of the
    Year…needing the
    comfort I never got..
    feeling alone…and lost
    as the pain cuts me…
    I am sorry….
    PLEASE forgive me
    I know of your lost and
    The pain you feel…but silly me
    I got scared....after all the
    reassurance
    The clock don’t move around me
    And others need you more
    Right now….how you take
    care of others
    Makes me love you even more..
    Your love is amazing…
    and your soul is beautiful
    I am sorry….
    CAN you forgive me?
    My mood changes as yours….but as…
    I extend my hand
    and wish to hold
    You as you have held me….
    Tryin to fix the pain
    And comfort the hurt
    I know now….
    We all deal in ways
    that leaves the
    One you love out at times..
    mine was wanting you
    close for this time the
    pain took over
    I should of
    understood instead of
    tryin to define
    I am SORRY
    Do you forgive me?
    CAN you?
    WILL you?

    just
    me
    blkangel
     
  2. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He will forgive you.....

    Peace......




    This was a nice peace.
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bless your heart!

    So sorry indeed...it's often time that we need
    to be together or be alone!
    I know you will be forgiven , now forgive yourself, you
    are only human...and a very good one at that!
    Blessings On your House!
     
  4. alter

    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a beautiful piece, so plaintive and loving ... you have a way with words that is just amazing.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The first step in forgiveness is to say you're sorry. The emotion here was very clear.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you fam for the loving support

    Pharaoh Jah .. hey my sweet brother...
    i hope he do..thanks you...

    msluciousb ... so true just hope its not to late....
    blessings my sister

    alter.. i posed this from my heart...
    my love is true...
    thank you

    watzinaname ..indeed so true..
    i have faith that holds me bond...
    just hope it is not to late...thank you
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's never 2 late! as we say in Baltimore Believe. I love the flo.
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    forgiveness is never late yet on time
    in time ear will hear thy whispers
    deep feelings flowin here
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    caramelpython....well i got the faith...
    so we see..within his heart i search
    i know i am there....but
    its my turn to lend a ear....
    just want him to trust and
    forgive me
    thanks for da love

    $$RICH$$.. much understand....
    the whispers in da ear
    wishin he use my shoulder
    i dont like the quiet storm
    that have form..
    thanks for the read and kind words...
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you must be sorry my sista if ya dont mind gettin smacked lol
    my sista i hope u get that forgiveness u seek :)
     
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