Black Poetry : Slurred Vision

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Aug 1, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking at you sometimes
    takes me to a point of intoxication that
    is beyond what a bars libations
    can do...I see you.....................
    upon my field of vision picking
    angel wings from the pasture
    and I / my / vision becomes slurred
    I'm thinking to myself in tripped
    over nouns and adjectives...all
    I can utter is "thank you Lord" in
    an inner voice that I can't recognize
    yet let stumble on my stoic tongue
    and paint you inside my silence.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish...

    [SIZE=huge]...that someone would
    look at me like that :lol:.
    You paint such wonderful
    pictures. My imagination
    is in its glory, when I
    read you, Mr. Verb...:D :D
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  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    absolutely beautiful, blak!
    superbly done
    sweet and simple
    thank you
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES

    I LIKE HOW U VISION LOVE WITHIN YA SOUL
    AS YO HEART SPEAKS ......SMOOVEEEE!! FLOW:toast:
     
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    blak

    thank GOD for eyesight!

    very nice:)
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    BLAK

    this short impact
    stuff
    going deep

    feeling ya

    DSS
     
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