Quiet Poetry Lounge : Slum Beautiful (inspired by outkast)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Jul 1, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (rappin with a southern drawll...)

    what up dawl (doll)
    how bout me and u walk up the hawl (hall)
    slip ya numba, give u a cawl (call)
    i'm loving you, conversation and all,
    i whisper in ya ear--
    *don't be appalled*

    hypothetical
    spittin and *****
    str-8 inarticulate
    foolin' who*

    i'm sweatin--
    thass why i love the cool in you
    dreaming a' you, ya soft body--
    it got me droolin' boo...
    i'm staring real hard--
    u noticed with the advertent cough--
    let's head up to the loft--
    in the bed show ya who the boss...
    hopeless romantic here,
    the lover's off--
    swimming in yo baby browns, getting lost--
    i'll give the world to be with you--
    *is that all it costs?*

    brothaz who lookin wrong--
    i'll slay 'em off like holocaust--

    *cuz u slum byooteefuh (beautiful)*



    sean.
     
  2. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pretty cool

    word twisting. I'd suggest you drop the explanations and just do it. Whoever needs an explanation sure enough don't need to know. Outkast is a fav of mine. Some of their cuts are sizzing.

    Love always.

    JAH Lives.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YESSSSS!!

    U FLOWED A TWISTED MEANNING OF LUV
    AND ITZ ON POINT TO PERFECTION
    IN DA HAWL AS SHE CAWL YA NAME
    WHAT A DAWL SHE BE JUST 4 DE...HUMMM!!
    NYCELY SAID AND DESPLAYED
    SEE WHAT LOVE CAN DO !
    :heart: :toast: :heart:
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seany!


    slum beautiful.... ? hmmm....

    i'm diggin' ya sexy southern drawl... :)
    as well as ya flow! (as usual!!)

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
    TIGHT FLOW. I'M FEELIN'
    THIS ONE JUST LIKE THE
    MANY OTHERS. BUT UH...
    WIPE YO MOUTH SWEETHEART.
    DON'T DROOL. I KNOW MY
    BODY'S SOFT BUT DON'T HURT
    YOURSELF STARIN'. BEAUTY
    THIS RARE IS KNOWN TO
    LEAVE ANY MAN OR WOMAN
    SPEECHLESS AND DUMBFOUNDED.
    SAVE YOUR STRENGTH FOR WHEN
    YOUR DROWNIN' IN MY BABY BROWNS.
    WAIT LET ME STOP TRIPPIN'. IT'S 4:30
    IN THE MORNING AND I'M TALKING OUT
    OF THE WRONG HOLE. I WOULDN'T WANT TO MAKE ANYONE JEALOUS :laugh: . BUT SERIOUSLY,
    TIGHT FLOW;)
    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
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