Black Poetry : Slowly

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, May 10, 2005.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We got into this rather quickly
    But the time it took to get to this moment
    Went by rather slowly
    This magic moment that grew from
    a slow and easy kiss on my lips
    Now transformed into one moment in time
    That seems to be lasting a lifetime
    Your body wrapped around me and
    I am yours and noone elses
    This intense heat and the love
    That developed so slowly
    You and me long conversations
    That stretch out into the night so deep
    You take the time to explore my every breath
    reaching for something deep within us
    The sheer bliss in every slow kiss
    You open up to me letting me feel you be near you
    We run away with each other all night
    Never too fast and not without thought
    You had the chance but still took it slowly
    Now we 're in love and I enjoy every moment
    Because we took it slowly

    :kiss1: :blowkiss:

    Don't look for love to move quickly it may pass you by
    If you must express your love in the physical please don't
    forget to WRAP IT UP!!!! :ref:
     
  2. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i started reading it because of the title...which i like
    i'm a great believer in "slow and steady wins the race"
    and this piece of yours sends out that message quite nicely...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    fast rabbits start out quick
    then die in the mix
    but the turttle moving slow
    getting the worth & much more
    finish first cross the line
    yeap ya right please take ya time
    and keep it covered up !
    protected and well
    tyte drop this hit and dwell .........
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this piece so much, because I always loved this song:

    I want a man with a slow hand
    I want a man with a tender touch
    I want somebody who could spend some time
    not come and go in a "heated rush"
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bangin' the drum slowly in love... I feel you!
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    absolutley beautiful and true.....ive had many realtionships ,and the best ones were the ones that started off slow and peaked reasonably....i liked alot....every one,single or not single,should peep this.....!
     
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    nice flow awesome meassage
     
  8. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you brothas and sistah for gettin down with my
    intimate flow one goes out to a very special brotha
    who showed me how to take life and passion slowly
     
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