Black Poetry : slowly cheating

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Oct 26, 2002.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (its a old poem summer 2001,but i thought yeah why not,)




    She has his eyes ....
    He sees her smile ....
    She is his friend ....
    He helps her hand ....
    She mould him than ....
    Sumthing began........


    Please dont make me walk next to you..
    i see you search for this other hand...
    Please dont let me cook a meal for you..
    youre taste is somewhere else..
    please ...dont let me sit next to you
    you dont like the filling of this chair..

    Dont make me longing more for you ..

    Why are you doing this?.........

    you dont like my huge
    you dont like my touch
    you dont like my kiss

    You know its unfair ....

    Why do you keep me there?
    why do you keep me there ????

    just let me fly
    so i can find
    my kind of
    guy...

    or let,s say love of "my"' life



    He has her eyes ..
    She sees his smile..
    He is her friend.....
    She helps his hand......
    He mould her than....
    And for me..

    it was,

    the END...
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sad huh...




    yes it is ......



    untill i find mine....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and u will find yours what seem sad will bring happiness
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Karma, liberty, karma.
    He will get his just-deserves, and you will find a man worthy of you.
    *Emma*
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks.....i dont think its karma...i have no hate for him.....sumthimes i have the feeling that god is using me to bring other people togther....examlpe ...one time i was dating ..a guy he had a past relationship.....but i finaly stept back in order for them(his ex) to reunite again........it was hard (painfull believe me)but they finaly did...and i was happy because my inuition was right....
    somethimes my intuition tels me things ...........and than i step back because....(but the person dont even knows it yet)...as far as my self ............i,m going for the real thing........I dont want to be with someone knowing that his disires is to be with someone else...................I want to be number 2 not 1 because god comes on number 1 ........................but certanly not on number 3 neverrrrr..
    as far as the man .....i think there are a lot of man who are worthy to me..........but not everyman is my other half Yo feeling me
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    maybe i have to change the title into......The painfull matchmaker....


    that this poem gets a positive site............
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is sad...but we learn, we move on and sometimes stumble upon better "TREASURES"...unknown!
     
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    sigh.don't worrry about it g ......godd flow
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks angels&sweet :grouphug:





    LoveLibertylady:heart:
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    liberty, i liked this piece, it was sad, but it's like that sometimes...you will find the one for you eventually.
     
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