Black Poetry : "Slow Jams in B Flat Prose"

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by AmenKaRaHeru, Dec 26, 2003.

  1. AmenKaRaHeru

    AmenKaRaHeru New Member MEMBER

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    This Blue Magic "spell on my mind"
    Has me zooming with the Commodores
    Whispers "Olivia" as she "lay lady lays"
    In an Isley's 3 + 3 "Sensuality"
    She's Lost and turned out.

    On a "natural high" written in Bloodstone.
    The "Love I gave to you" became Delfonic
    Moments became forever
    When I found you in my dreams
    about "love on a two way street"

    She Whispers again
    "Are you going my way?"
    Stylistics aside, "You're as right as rain"
    I reply as we "walk right up to the sun"
    Hand in Hand.

    Hotep

    AmenKaRaHeru
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So creative, and a nice trip down memory lane with those classic tunes...very nice. And, welcome to destee.
     
  3. AmenKaRaHeru

    AmenKaRaHeru New Member MEMBER

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    Hotep,

    Thank You.

    We heard abut this site from some peeps on BlackVoices and liked what we have seen so far. We'll post some more as time goes by.

    Hetepu~~!!

    AmenKaRaHeru
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a walk in the part
    and slowly caressin da mental
    this was awesome had me in
    the yesteryears ....tyte scribe poet
     
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    :wave: welcome to deste...
    nice flow here..
    hope to read more...
    welcome again....:angel1:
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :wave: Hello and Welcome AmenKaRaHeru :wave:

    Beautiful Poetry ... swaying to its beat ... Thanks for Sharing!

    So glad you joined us, we have many forums, discussions, voice chat ... www.destee.com/chat ... and a house full of love. You are welcome to it all. Please make yourself at home, because you are.

    :heart:

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    Wonderful and Refreshing Piece...
    You took me back for a moment,
    on the songs you mention..a few
    of many favorites...

    love the rhythmic flow captured in this piece!
     
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    Betcha by golly, wow, maybe it was just my imagination, but U dropped the bomb on me with this.

    Nice.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my u sure now how to get a sista all mellow :)
    welcome AmenKaRaHeru :wave:
    hope to read more of ya
     
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