Black Poetry : Slow Fire

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Amun-Ra, May 11, 2001.

  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dark warmth radiates, stimulating
    and relaxing the mood and minds, stirring
    silent passions, heating gentle nature,
    while inflaming delicate desires.

    Embers stir slowly, warming supple skin
    while easing nervous tension and breathing
    welcomed warmth into two before the fire.
    Dark eyes reflect fire tips dancing across
    glowing coals and crackling kindling, content
    knowing that the night is long and patient.

    Spellbinding hypnotizer, flickers and rustles,
    throwing long shadows against watching walls;
    witnesses to quiet passion of humanity's hearth.



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  2. dnommo

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    entering from the garden

    RA,

    you got me in deep introspect on this one...tight piece and tight column. i shall review and respond...

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    returning to the garden carrying your column...
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RA....

    i loved this!!

    reminded me of "Paradyse Found"...

    thanks for sharing... :)

    Peace.
    SunShyne~
     
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    Amun-Ra,

    IMAGERY second to none! Bro, this is seriously nice...fo' real. "10"

    one love,blak
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for replying. These folks is about to make me lose my mind up in here. Sometimes you just have to leave the office, go outside, drink a little air (and something else if you got it) and then try your best not to cuss somebody off the face of the earth, but all is well that ends well. I'm at home! Ahhhh! :toast:


    Ra
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    CHEERS :toast: Ra...... MAN DES BE AS TYGHT AS IT GETS
    LOVIN THIS HEA!
     
  7. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From the time it breaks and the time it warms, there is much space in between but a cozy fire is all it takes to break the ice.

    Ra

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    Nice and easy...

    Definitely loved this piece Amun-ra.... thank you for sharing...
     
  9. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing like a little fireside chat--Ra :heart:
     
  10. 8th wonder

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    ooooh!!!!

    This is really nice..... got me feel'n all funny over here...
     
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