Black Poetry : Slow Dance Romance

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NittyGrit, Dec 13, 2001.

  1. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    two bodies in a dimly lit place
    you and I standing face to face
    intruding on each other's space
    nestled in a warm embrace

    Maxwell sings his lullaby
    candlesticks begin to cry
    tears of wax begin to fall
    timid flames reflect against the wall

    the music starts to calm and sooth
    evidence of a romantic mood
    our bodies slowly start to move
    orchesrated by the groove

    you lay your head upon my shoulder
    i gently squeeze your body closer
    like a gentle wind scampering by
    i hear you release a relaxing sigh

    curious hands begin to dance
    over your snugly fitting pants
    my fingertips are drowning in
    the soothing warmth of your carmel skin

    bathing in each others touch
    wanting each other just that much
    satisfied within this sweet caress
    slow dancing preludes acts of sex...

    let your mind wander
    NittyGrit(c)01
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep! - Noddin' in agreement....

    Nitty,

    Nice slow dance grind no doubt!

    1/
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    romantic romance

    lovin da one ya wit
    well felt here fo sho!
    nitty ya got da lovebug i see...:D :toast:
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's what maxwell does...very nicely written, nittyg. i'm lovin' it, yes, indeed.
     
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    Nitty

    Nice romantic flo.

    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    YESSSSSSSS!!!!
    Loving this scene!

    "...candlesticks begin to cry." Oooo

    BE
     
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