Black Poetry : ~~~~~~~Slow-Burning~~~~~~~~~~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Jun 9, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There was a time
    when we danced to the
    smooth sounds of slow-burning
    grooves.
    We moved sinuously against each other;
    the sounds of Minnie Ripperton in
    our ear and the lyrics to "Inside My Love"
    pushing us higher and higher.
    There was never any question
    of seizing the opportunity to love you,
    and you never withheld that right.
    I flowed and you smoothed.
    There wasn't anything that would
    hold us under heaven or above earth.
    I gave myself to you willingly.
    You were a murderess!
    You killed my loneliness and walked away without
    being charged.
    Yes Lord! You and I are some kind of wonderful!
    A pair of lovers untouched by life and time.
    We exist.
    We breath.
    Deeply we breath...in and out and in synch.
    Your breath becomes my sustainment and our gazes
    are locked across space while we gently
    loose ourselves in the liquid sway of
    dancing to slow-burning grooves of love and
    a lifetime of affection.

    ~Copyright
    The Year of The Monkey (2004).
    The 93rd year, 4th month, 22nd day(9th of June)
    "Selestial Khemet" Publishers
    ~*PropheticNsyght
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats sooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. That's one lucky lady you got there:)
     
  3. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you darling. She is indeed.
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooh...I remember oh to well...Thanks for the trip down under....
    Tia..
     
  5. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for taking that trip with me beautiful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love how this caress the mental of loving and
    touch wit care .....sweet release
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a wonderful blend of souls this was. Enjoying the flows.
     
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    loving this flow
    it took me in
    nice drop indeed
     
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    *sigh* I love minnie riperton :luvv: back down memory laneeeeeeee :) This was sweet to the poetic ear my brotha :)
     
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    Brother when you craft a peace that contains the words...

    Sinuous

    Slow-Burning

    Minnie Ripperton

    Murderess...

    Heaven & Earth

    Lovers

    Gazes

    Locked

    Grooves

    Love

    and Lifetime of Affection...


    It's like the perfect ingredients to give a sister FEVER :blush:

    THE SLOW BURNING KIND... :spinstar:

    Brother your pen harnesses a power to which my poetic eyes had
    yet to know until reading you... :spinstar:

    Encore :spinstar: Encore :spinstar: Encore :spinstar: