Black Poetry : Slow Burn

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Oct 30, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hearts afire
    set ablaze
    by love
    with significance

    Warmest afterglows
    delight and kiss
    upon my happiest moments of a

    slow, slow burn in me
    that aches
    so congruously
    within your own
    feverish pain
    caused by
    nothing else that matters

    except…

    that heated love

    this raging passion

    our scorching sexualities

    Brought together like the fire’s breath
    permeated by its own love nemesis…

    that which is like
    hot fire and soothing ice

    A liquid love that hurts us
    wickedly tender
    like the slow of
    our eternal burn

    Flames of love that sear hearts
    to an
    intense throb

    Living vicariously through
    tangible fantasies of a
    deep and unhurried
    singeing of souls

    we burn slow…

    we burn hard…

    we burn with love...

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BURN ON! hot.

    "slow, slow burn in me
    that aches
    so congruously
    within your own
    feverish pain
    caused by
    nothing else that matters "
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooweeeeee!!! RED ALERT GQ on fire
    da passion
    da love
    his sexuality
    his warmth
    ladies RED ALERT !!!!!
     
  4. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hm... i'm hot!
    hot for my man...-7 :spinstar:
     
  5. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bighead.

    you betta shut up!! :D
    this was hot (no pun intended) &
    so very "gq"esque.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    the red flava was phat
    and this piece is burnin' up

    another G masterpiece

    DSS
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is some hot stuff poet
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr. Romance

    can we get some lyp service on this one here 11/24/02 ?





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