Quiet Poetry Lounge : Slipping Into Us

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Mar 21, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    slipping into darkness
    comes to mind
    as I close my eyes
    to join you
    in that muted/mellow
    space
    where I
    share your dreams

    there is a thin
    silk veil
    between us
    that breathes with you
    and when I time
    it just right
    I enter
    as you inhale

    and instantly
    you reach
    for me
    take me in
    and hold me
    close

    it's warm inside
    you
    I cuddle
    beside
    you

    trying my best
    to
    draw your heat
    yearning so much
    2 B N
    you

    2 B U

    I want to feel
    what I do/how I
    bring / you long
    & full
    when you
    pull me
    on/to you
    ...place my
    swollen lips up/on
    you

    what does
    it feel like
    to part
    these hips
    as I
    turn /back/
    into
    me
    at the
    exact
    moment you,
    in turn,
    enter
    me?

    slipping into darkness
    is you kissing my soul
    and me loving you
    whole

    both of us feeling
    the feel of
    us touching
    inside
    each other's
    liquid flow

    simultaneously

    alyce (c) 2002

    From "B-52"
     
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    bassaman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, Alyce....

    rg
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da emotional bliss of feelings has me ovawhelm by ya mighty pen
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce.


    yessssss.... indeed! :)

    "wow!!" & "whoa!!" would be appropriate
    responsed to this heah love joynt my sista!

    oh... & let's not forget "DAYUM!!" :D

    it's tyght like dat!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmm...
    this is a wonderful peace, missus A!
    makes me want my husband
    a little bit more...
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all....rg, Rich, GA...and Missus K-ness

    ...note to K-ness...what you got going on right now is supposed to be the best stuff :wink: ....go'n and handle it...:D

    a
     
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    still slipping deeper from this creation of a classic
     
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    When 2 lovingly connect, mind, body, and soul... No words can quite express how I feel about this one, but, this poetess is keen at her craft.
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yikes, girlfriend! Youz a bad bama, lol!
     
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