Black Poetry : Slippin in my...

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Slippin in my mind.
    Like the sand in the hour glass of time.
    Stealing my thoughts I think often of you.
    And then my phone starts to ring.
    Heart starts to sing.
    Wondering when we will do our thing.
    Patient but eager, a lady always.
    Counting, sexy Big Chocolate it's been to many days.
    You call with a soft touch in your voice.
    I say I surrender cause I have no choice.
    Into my mind you have already penetrated...
    So hard today, I couldn't have concentrated.
    I feel liberated.
    Glad I waited...
    You look sedated...
    You say I am not satiated...
    Oh , didn't you anticipate it.
    This girls been on a Man Diet...
    Dare you to taste and then try it!
    You smile and say we can just cuddle.
    I say it's alright baby, we can do a huddle.
    You slip in...
    To my mind
    and my space
    leave a smile on my face...
    that I cannot erase!
    Ooooooooooooooooooooooooh!
    BJS(C)2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now i felt this beautiful thing
    the huddle & cuddle sweet kisses
    minds connect bodies touch
    u painted a pic i vision wow!!!!!

    u go gurl love like u do
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dont know now...
    i am smellin love all up ova here...
    tight girl...
    much love i am feelin ya..
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am feeling you!! I have tried out the "man diet" too-lol!! This was nice!!
    Eternal
     
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    this is cute:)
     
  6. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks y'all!

    Now SWT, ain't nothing cute about this...this is sensuality being awakened...we ain't there yet but it sure is a nice adventure! Keep reading!

    Blessings On Ya House!:toast:
     
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    oooooh, this one flowed like "butta"

    I really like the passionate cascade of anticipation!
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm REALLY feelin this one. You go ahead wit your bad self.
     
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    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot one... *HEE HEE made me blush a lil... i was lovin it. keep it flowin, girl..
    peace-MsDy
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hahahahahah!

    Y'all so nosy and busy reading all this stuff into everything, not saying it's not so. So I am just going to let it flow like I know!

    Blessings on ya House!:D
     
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