Black Poetry : Slimber

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Dec 20, 2005.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 31, 2001
    Messages:
    1,662
    Likes Received:
    29
    Ratings:
    +31
    I'm a slimber gurlie
    Just floetry in motion
    Shere devotion
    Mixed liked a potion
    I stirr u and learn u gradually
    I hold u and stroke u casually
    I wiggle and giggle my sillies away
    I'll tickle ya back and mush dem potatoes to a smooth texture
    i'm a limber jack
    i'll take a crack at it
    i'll nack at it and wack at it
    nap at it
    like a habit
    i'm a slimber gurlie
    Just floetry in motion
    Shere devotion
    Mixed like a potion
    Smooth as baby lotion
    I'll leave u open ...

    D.S.
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 19, 2005
    Messages:
    3,872
    Likes Received:
    134
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    working to own my plus size empire.....
    Location:
    I'm a Georgia Peach!!!!
    Ratings:
    +135
    who you slimber gurlie no way just kidding d.s. you know this sista loves ya!
    love the flow on this one keep up the good work. me and you must flo sometimes. Nevar!:spinstar:
     
  3. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 17, 2005
    Messages:
    59
    Likes Received:
    4
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +4
    im feelin this flow, nicely done, holla back passion
     
  4. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Oct 26, 2005
    Messages:
    2,965
    Likes Received:
    11
    Occupation:
    Pos Technical Support
    Location:
    Windy City
    Ratings:
    +12
    Putting those poetic
    Lyrics together
    Thats hot DS much love
    Sister
     
  5. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 19, 2005
    Messages:
    212
    Likes Received:
    10
    Occupation:
    Student
    Location:
    Texas
    Ratings:
    +10
    So smooth mah fellow poet. I loved every word of it.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    ahhhh!! and i love the mixture
    rub me again ......................