Black Poetry : Slience

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  1. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cold desert floor lay inside my Slience
    Death is the loudest things I know
    Wind sound the alarm to move

    My slience is deaf'ing

    earth shatering spell bound
    holy women wrapped in the moment of now

    my slience is the loudest things I know
    words my messiah

    bleed from my finger tips
    no gauges to control the rate of
    drops per min
    drained

    my slience
    is my window
    touched but I can't move

    in dreams prayers lead me to the begining
    hope lands in Daniels pits

    slience is the only emotion
    mother could deal with
    friends
    we have been since I cold speak
    a fraction of what I have written
    silence is my emotion,
    my raven knock at my chamber door

    Chiles me oatmeal....
    slience is the only thing I know

    SCREAM-
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful flow well scribed
     
  3. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    that first stanza really pulled me in...down...i could hear
    the scream... hear it....
    thanks for helping me feel...hear...understand...
     
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    AWESOME

    I love your work
     
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    this was awesome enjoyed this read....