Black Poetry : Slide (A Cosmic Groove)

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  1. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our skins meshed under the intense heat of midnight
    The moonbeams melting smooth as cream into the pores of our skin
    The aroma of cocoa butter and rain mist arise into the incense smoke filled room
    Candlelight dances in my eyes
    As we grasp hands and swing our bodies to the seductive groove of a saxaphone
    Piano melodies ripple lightly down our spines
    Sweat dripping and streaming on taut thighs
    Calves flexed
    Backs dimpled and tense with effort
    As confessions of love are murmured from between full dark lips
    Fingers carressing silk currents
    Grasping for the last moment of restraint
    Before the explosion of silver shimmers
    Ricochet with white light through the center of our bodies
    Until we slide effortlessly into the velvet softness of midnight webbed with stars
    Capturing them beneath our eyelids as our breathes slow
    Peaceful in the silence of our universal communion
     
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    midnight moon beam
    and flicker of candle lite
    dance off the beauty
    of ya skin
    romantic vision seen
    hand n' hand
    we caress the fate of our beings
    our hearts touch gracefully

    flow on sis
     
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    That was definitely SENSUAL..... of the captivation of the senses....
    I was diggin:
    "Ricochet with white light through the center of our bodies
    Until we slide effortlessly into the velvet softness of midnight webbed with stars "

    You painted this effectively..... and sexy.

    Andrew
     
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    *bows to the brothers* Thank you. Keep sliding everybody......
     
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    Wow. This is such a beautiful piece.
    The imagery is sooooo... perfect.
    I think this has to be one of you best pieces ever Legacy!
    Great stuff.

    *Emma*
     
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