Black Poetry : Sleeping With You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Feb 13, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing can compare to sleeping with you
    Our bodies are free, hang-ups put aside
    Time is lost, every fantasy comes true

    Making love with you is something special
    We create a rhythm that's ours alone
    We touch each other ever so careful

    We go far beyond the limits of sex
    To a place so intense sounds can't be heard
    Pleasing each other, unable to rest

    To get where we go a path must be made
    A love lined alley of trust and respect
    So what's in me can go deep within you

    When we make love I'm outside myself
    No way I can sleep with anyone else

    BE
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man you heating the place up today!
     
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    Hot piece Poet!
    Hot!
     
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    BE...what can be said but

    excellent...

    one.
     
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    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A very beautiful description. Images all too clear and wonderful; sentiments that provoke the deepest of thoughts.

    tight
    Bert
     
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