Quiet Poetry Lounge : sleeping with stones …

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Spisces, May 5, 2001.

  1. Spisces

    Spisces Member MEMBER

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    sleeping with stones …

    Once I slept with a stone
    like sticks I thought, it
    might break my bones

    but this stone was black
    onyx, perfectly adorned
    smooth to my touch with
    each facet formed

    I admired this stone I held
    in my hand
    This rare Nile jewel I could
    not understand

    it glittered so with each fleck
    of moonlight
    for I did not know stones came
    in the night

    on this bed of rocks i burrowed
    with pleasure, it led to a mine
    shaft drenched in dark treasure …

    stalactites dripping
    under my ground
    Dripping dew/droplets
    ever down …Drip
    drip,
    … drip

    my crystal shard glistened
    inside this diamond mine,
    beneath hot molten lava -
    her lips I did find

    our moist exploration, her
    thighs stretched wide,
    revealing the gems
    that lay
    deep inside …

    once I slept with a stone;
    and she rocked my world.

    *Spisces*
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    that is why gems are treasures...

    THEY ROCK!!!

    This is soooooo full, SPisces! So rich!

    Thank you

    A
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spices~

    Tight piece ~
    Reminds me of a piece
    I did a while back called
    "STONES".

    Lovin' the flow.
     
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    Ummm...

    I'm left speechless :rolleyes:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tight drop
    thanks for sharing....
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good one, blkangel. Now this was a poem. Such wonderful use of imagery and metaphor, made for an erotic piece so tastefully and eloquently done. Bravo.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AWESOME TYTE DROP HERE WHEWWWWWWWWWW!!!
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...this was hot
    a classic no doubt...
    unearthing gems...
    @@@@@@@@@
     
  9. Love Always,

    Love Always, Guest

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    A rare and beautifully exotic piece....
     
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