Black Poetry : Sleepin-N-Creepin

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jul 4, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One be sleepin
    The other one creepin
    Stepping out
    The hour late
    Going to open up
    Another creeper's gate
    Creepers be creepin
    Not thinking
    About their lover who be sleepin
    Those who sleep
    Have their own date to keep
    It's rest they need
    For the Jones they feed
    What sleepers do
    Is not done in the night
    Unlike creepers
    Sleepers do it in the daylight
    Creepers and sleepers
    Really just the same
    Done at different times
    Doing the same thing
    Just a different name

    BE
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    this represents a case of...

    see-saw feelings

    something somewhere lacks
    and there is need for one to
    communicate with not only
    the person he or she cheats on

    but him or herself about
    being true to themselves


    one love

    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    TWO OF A KIND

    THE HE/SHE SLEEPERS & CREEPERS
    GAME ALL THE SAME PLAYING DA GAME
    ONE BY DAY AND ONE BY NIGHT
    MAN!! ITS FUNNY HOW WE THINK
    WHEN IN THE HEAT OF DA MOMENT
    NOT THINKING ABOUT THE OTHER HALF

    BE............... U BETTER TELL THE STORY
    Mr.Poet:toast:
     
  4. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    interesting perception

    or shall i say concept. I never thought about it that way... Interesting scribe...now you got me thinking...
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't know what to say
    but i like this flow and that's no lie...
    i got to let this one marinate.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    Dayuuumm BE ~ is there anything left to say...??

    Nice piece ~ reaLity flowing forth... :wink:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Haha
    creeper and sleepers
    this was tight poet
    i love the flow on this piece
     
  8. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a unique of explaining the same act flow on poet.!!!!!!!!!!!!!:tweety:
     
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