Black Poetry : sLeep Deprived

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, May 2, 2005.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    come peep inside a mind that is sleep deprived
    consumed by time,deep with rhymes,so poems i leave behind....
    so while the rest hate,-i defeat em and beat em with kindness....
    the next day,they'll be all praisin,callin me 'Highness'...
    i just smoked that haze now im in a daze,walkin miles for dayz...
    my style and grace never ceases to amaze,gettin smiles from snakes...
    and in this moment,it feels as tho the stakes are high...
    so i steadily hold on,cause no one is takin mine...

    whut am i talkin about>??

    musta been the beat in the back..
    that had me ,thinkin up facts,instead of dreamin of plaques...
    but whuts a plaque,when we acheive thru knowledge and self wisdom...
    these dayz they sell rythym for money,its funny,yall fell victim...
    i dance with the soul of the piano keyz while hangin from guitar strings...
    Pluckin at the air from the sax while relaxin on high hats.....
    all intertwined ,like im, ~one with the muzik....
    its in my mind,its in my veins,~i substitute food for it...
    jugglin' words with differents sounds and rythyms on this steep incline...
    consumed by time,this is whut i do when im sleep deprived....

    :insane:

    but ya gotta luv it....muzik's the only thing that gets me thru it..
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice step. On to lifes musical notes. Awake not getting any sleep, music going deep, moving your feet. No sleep walking. Your talking about the flow of life.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    soulful note musically tame'd
    sweet release .....................
     
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    Laid back...

    Lurk got my mind on his rhythm & his rhythm' on my mind!
     
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    Awesome vibe on this.
     
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    not bad at all. i like it. music is a lifestyle. i love it. e-flat= e-phlat that's me!
     
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    This was smooth slim...Did I mention how great it is to have you back
    flowing with us on the regular... :pool: this was tight
     
  9. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx girl!!!i try,u know!!

    but yea,it feels good to be back!!!

    i missed yall!
     
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    This is was fiyah, i loved it
    :heart:
    -story
     
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