Black Poetry : Sleep Adam sleep ...( for all the Lady,s that are waithing and searching)

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sleep Adam ...sleep
    untill its time we meet..

    My love i,m trying to find my way out of this jungle
    I,ve been hunted by some ugly animals and bitten by
    some filthy insects.....
    i know god will heal most of these wounds..
    at the time of my arrival..
    I,m just following my obligation....
    looking joyfull forward to my destination...

    I dont know where you are..
    i dont know who you are..
    or what you do.....
    all i have is gods voice power and grace....
    that will lead ..
    me
    to
    you....
    I,m longing for you baby....
    distance won,t put out my fire.
    missing only stimulates this disire..
    I,m talking to myself quitly;..come on girl
    walk on
    be strong
    you know it wont take to long...
    untill you find youre peacefull HOME...
    and if i don,t find you here.............than i know
    that youre in heaven ..waiting on me ...when its my time to go...
    i just know...

    You would welcoming me into our beautifull place
    First you would bathe me in a salt waterbath....
    and you would say...."'these are youre tears you cried when you
    missed me ...over the years that i ,ve collect "
    and after that....
    You would show me around ..
    on a white hors with my head resting on youre chest..
    yes youre chest....
    and silenty we would look at holy vieuws
    eternal sunrise and sunsets

    but i know if i find you here on earth....i know..
    i just know..
    that you would look at me like the sun opens her eyes
    and looks down at earth...

    i know that youre voice would sound like the most beautifull
    melody ever heard.

    i know that youre arms will reach out like the branches
    of a sequoia

    i know that you would make me smile like a flower that blossems

    i know that youre hands and fingers would stroke me
    like the feathers of a white dove..

    i know that youre breath would slide along my skin...
    like a soft breeze over the desserts sands...

    i know that youre atmosphere would make my blood feel like lava running through my vains.....
    and youre tears would cool me off like the Niagrawaterfalls

    i know that you would kiss me like the sun touches
    the horizon when it goes down...

    and eventually .....we would make love
    like the movement of a totaly eclips
    you would stir me up like the sea
    like ebb and flood
    low tide high tide...


    i know that you would rub youre body against me
    like a earth crust on a earth layer..
    youre rubbing will evoke a landslide..
    witch will evolve into an eathquake
    witch will cause us to unload an energie
    that will end us up loving eachother passionately
    like a twisted cyclone....

    Our souls would connect
    stronger than magnets
    we,d become one flesh
    with me bounded on his chest..

    we,d become ONE
    we,d become LOVE........

    untill that time we meet
    untill we are free
    untill its you and me
    untill that time
    sleep adam sleep....
    sleep my love..
    softly...
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wanted to post it in blue small letters ...but that didnt happend
    for the mood....by reading this hope you can see the vieuw....god is leading eva to adam like in genisis...
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmm yes i really liked this piece......
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    giving myself props here........lol
     
  5. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    giving you props here!!!

    humbly a Queen must wait as the Universe prepares her King...Be Patient!

    1 :heart:
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  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you twofisch.........thank you
    cause really ......i was proud of this piece and for me it is very close to me
     
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    you go ahead gurl lol i have poems like that where i was like i know i did a good job on that one but no replies still keep ya head up high!
     
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    This was simply beautiful. The passion and emotion resonated deeply in this piece, and your images leapt from the screen with such life that I was touched. May your Adam come to you in due time. Peace
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its a long time ago but thanks Desert storm and Lagacy....sista,s
    its also for you i know alot of sistagirls out there are looking for their...chests....cause we are the ribs.........
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i forgot.....sista,s
    dont search.....
    trust in god ....
    he will lead you to him....
    and he will lead him .....
    to you....
     
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