Black Poetry : Slave to Your Love (Love Slave)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ScorpioRising, May 13, 2004.

  1. ScorpioRising

    ScorpioRising Member MEMBER

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    I belong to my Daddy mind body and soul
    I compliment his mind
    I am extension of his body
    I am reflection of his soul

    I serve and fullfill my Daddy
    That he may adore and cherish me

    I endure pain
    That I may be his weakness

    I bestow my love to him
    That I may be his strength

    I submerge myself in him
    Reborn...woman of his desire

    Though I am pathway to hi inequities
    I am key to his salvation

    Though I am embodiment of his soul and grace
    My Daddy destroys my world
    Recreating me in his likeness

    I am bound to him
    Sweetly inflicting me
    I am bound to him
     
  2. Destee

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    QQ'n at Brother Scorp ... you okay? ... :)

    :heart:

    Deste
     
  3. ScorpioRising

    ScorpioRising Member MEMBER

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    I'm str8. I had technical problems. All is well
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very nice
    like it.....sorta dont know what to say
    but it was tight
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lQQking

    ok, the poem was very nice but now I'm confused???? If you are a bothe...then explain this line????


     
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    nice drop poeticly sprayed
    flow on
     
  7. ScorpioRising

    ScorpioRising Member MEMBER

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    Nita, I'm ALL MAN. Yet as an aspiring poet, I can write from any perspective. Actually, I wrote this for my wife so she could better understand what i wanted from her.
     
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    :hot: :hot: :hot: Nice piece,
     
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