Quiet Poetry Lounge : SLAP, SLAP

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Aug 29, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    ooo u talked so much junk
    curse words drip from your lips
    tearing out my rib cage
    slow hit, fast hits

    oooo u had so much to say
    bad mouthin me every witcha way
    hurtin my feelings , unreal
    day by day

    and i bit my tongue
    and said i'd have patience
    took bruiese like a champ
    thinkin it would make a difference

    but it didn't

    so that's why
    when i came over last night
    full of wine and spirits
    and u got smart

    I LET U HAVE IT

    slap, slap, pimp
    slap

    right across ur unshaven
    face
    boy u looked surprised!
    your eyes opened wide

    and u retreated from the fury
    that came to a head
    from my broken spirit
    that manifested thru my hand

    SLAP, SLAP
    chase u down the stairs
    no tears in my eyes
    and u were not prepared

    call the police?
    i snatch the phone out the wall
    now u punk, who the fugg
    u gonna call

    for all the pain
    for all the suffering
    for the love i gave
    to get nothing

    this is for you
    SLAP, SLAP.AND
    IT FELT GOOOOODDDD.:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol................slap slap !
    whack to da head dis speaks out loud
    i hear ya ....slap
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I didn't know you layed it down like this. :D

    You just had to get all liquored up, aye? :lol:

    This piece is nice....

    Thanks for sharing.

    :toast: :D
     
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    This piece is tight LOL Next time you need to slap somebody let, let me know, I'll help you. LOL
     
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    Re: MORE

    :spin: :spin: :spin: :laugh: :laugh:
     
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    I've done that mentally to my ex so many times, but not physically. Maybe I should slap the ho too. ;)
     
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    :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :jumping: :jumping:
     
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