Quiet Poetry Lounge : SLAM In the Mirror

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jan 18, 2008.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What it cost to be THE BOSS?
    Short term memory lost...

    Why can't I get off the sauce?
    You fell off the wagon, Horse

    Who 'dat in my mirror please?
    Who the hell you want to be

    What's my real identity?
    You don't know your history

    Then what them ho's
    See in me?
    Your butt acting miserably

    How come you cold diss'n me
    A grown arse man is what you see
    So why you wanna REFLECT ME ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :censored:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2008
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i see a double vision of a awesome two in one from da mirror
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am absolutely LOVING this piece. The mirror just reflects what it sees. This was awesome.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 1poet
    It's like feeling to personality
    The one everyone see that do the 9-5 in the
    world and the one in the inside
    that no one sees, but who is there always
    Great flow poet

    Peace~N~Love
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well now!

    Hee,hee,hee...

    this was good.

    Thanks.

    Desert Storm
     
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