Black Poetry : Sky's Changed

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  1. Awriter'ssoul

    Awriter'ssoul Member MEMBER

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    Sky's Changed

    Sky's changed,
    warmth of day, and graceful night.
    Sun rays refuse to shine it's
    once brilliant light.
    Clouds gloom the day, it's foggy gray,
    Birds won't sing or soar for me.
    Nightfalls with my tears,
    no longer solitude,
    just screaming silence...it's far to dark
    Heavens stars grow dim with each pusle,
    I think their dying.
    Moon no light
    we all are crying,
    or it's just me, with constant sighing.
    Yelling to the sky,
    embrace me it won't,
    I don't reconize it anymore.
    All is gone,
    Sky's changed,
    sense the day you went away.
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt every verse in this drop! :terrific:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :welldone:

    Welcome to destee.com
    very nice flowing here
    enjoyed every line

    come join us in voice chat as well
    sometimes....share your flow on the mic
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    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!!! I'm sucker for poems with nature themes intwined/combined with emotions.
    I dunno how to describe this piece....all I can say is...you surely touched me...
    Very nice.

    greets moham
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt the earthy sadness within. Well written vibe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    :wave: :wave: :wave: welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the community of love & peace
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    this was awesome tyte happy u are upon the family :dance:

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  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to "home" poet,
    Surely you got my full attention with this piece, you shared your skies my us and thanks for the peep inside...wonderful work
     
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    Welcome Poet...as all those before me
    this was a moving poem...
    Kick your feet up and make yourself at home
    we are all family...

    Will look for more work from you!
    Oneluv,
    Sage
     
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