Black Poetry : Skip Trace Her

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Sep 17, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    541
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +606
    Skip...
    Trace her
    She run out of town
    Bound for Vegas,
    Better lost than found

    Skip Tracer
    Don't call this in
    That rude number (411)
    Ain't in your zip

    Trip maker
    Come east to west
    To meet that Zephyr
    At a Windy City, rest...

    Skip...
    Trace her
    Tell all the boyz
    Better men have chased her
    To lose all them toys

    Yet; I can't change her
    From my mental tv
    Skip Tracer
    Could you find her
    For me ~

    Honey,
    Where's the remote? :confused:

    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 10, 2001
    Messages:
    2,696
    Likes Received:
    5
    Occupation:
    Self Employed, Business Consultant
    Location:
    Kansas City, Missouri
    Ratings:
    +6
    Running away to get away...

    Skip trace her and when you face her, what you gonna say...Did you even ask her why she felt the need to get away?
    Skip trace her , make her get an eraser, and smooth her footsteps from the sand.
    Cause when you have to run to hard, she is running from something man...
    Now if she want's a good man she won't be hard to find...But Skip tracer her and when you face her...She will only run away again..."If you love something set if free, if it is your's it will come back to you!"
    Blessings On Ya House
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    541
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +606
    Yeah! Thanks.
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2003
    Messages:
    6,008
    Likes Received:
    44
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Praising The Lord
    Location:
    Baltimore, MD
    Ratings:
    +44
    nice piece 1poetsought
    you was on in my head
    with this flow
    loving it
    Peace
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    tyte skip trace
    1poet dis was phat ...
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    541
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +606
    Thank you!
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Singapore
    Joined:
    May 13, 2003
    Messages:
    6,477
    Likes Received:
    110
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Servant of the People
    Location:
    Bay Area, CA
    Ratings:
    +131
    i love the way that u paint poetic pictures :)
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    541
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +606
    Triniti, I am very happy to paint for you. Thanks!
     
  9. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 27, 2003
    Messages:
    1,115
    Likes Received:
    4
    Location:
    Fayetteville, NC
    Ratings:
    +4
    this piece was tight...i love the way it was written...you need a part 2. lol
     
  10. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    541
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +606
    True Love

    Thanks, you are very sincere and I really appreciate your comments. :)
     
Loading...