Black Poetry : skin (part 1 of love trilogy)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Feb 19, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u saturated my senses,
    it was dark-gray around us
    the sheets shattering
    like delicate fingers
    after a crushing burdan
    crackes them

    fiyah turned 100
    shades of white hot
    when u whispered
    how "it was yours"
    in my ear.....

    i sat on mountains
    that grew mouths
    and devoured
    my every memori
    it was only u,

    u touched me
    and sweat
    cascaded down
    open, free pores
    that glistened across
    my body....

    u sucked my toes
    ****....
    electricity coursed
    through my body
    untill i could just scream.....

    to be continued........
    -story

    copywrite 2004, all rights reserved
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    dis was passion and all kind of good
    thangz pt.2 now !!
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich :heart: (in narrarators voice) pt.2 coming soon to a forum near u.....lol
    much :heart:
    -story
     
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    this was hot....
    tight scribe....
    pt 2 cant wait
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank ms.black, glad u liked it,
    much love,
    -story
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    story,

    I have mad love for you...but at 14 what you know about erotic? lol...what we old folks gone do about ya'll youngn's ? Just kidding...nice scribe....drop the part two on the site.

    blak
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL :)gosh sister..this is nice
    the story is flowing
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  8. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was madd fire.....I was feelin this
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey, thanks yall, im just happy to be back, been gone entirly to long....
    thanks for reading me,
    :heart:
    -story
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok, I had to bring this one back because I enjoyed the 1st one that much , Much love 2 ya Poet...thanks 4 this read. :)
     
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