Black Poetry : Skillz Challenge-Children Of The Streets

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GYPSYMAN, Aug 8, 2001.

  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I
    walk down
    flooded
    city streets
    tasting aura's
    from corporate
    exec's
    to
    those that lay down
    on park benches
    to rest
    I
    detect
    multiple masks
    and soul's
    bent on
    fruitless
    tasks
    along
    with those
    with
    gift
    of gab
    or
    stuck on
    sad mad or
    simply look
    like
    the day's
    gone
    bad...
    atmospheres
    emanate
    like
    dead stars
    and some
    pass
    soothing
    smiling
    blessed
    understanding
    and loving
    who they
    are....
    MY TEST
    comes
    when its
    my turn
    to reflect
    what im
    feelin'

    and

    when i feel
    phucked
    up....

    remember

    my sole
    purpose is
    to lift
    another
    up....

    NO MATTER WHAT
    cause
    we are
    all
    CHILDREN
    of
    THE MOST HIGH
    from
    the day
    we are
    born
    untill
    the day

    we die.

    So just for today at least

    to all eyes who see this

    much LOVE much Peace.

    sincerely

    from the gypsy.



    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Amen CHILDREN OF GOD
    CITY STREETZ OF CHILD HOOD
    VERY NICE WORK:toast:
     
  3. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice...Very Nice....

    You did a good job on this one. Go Gypsy go Gypsy Go!!! :x:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm singin along wit Shaneak ....

    :jumping: Go Gypsy, get your flow on... Go Gypsy, get your flow on... Go Gypsy :jumping:

    Seriously though sweetie....
    This piece had a sista gaspin' for air.... :jawdrop:

    Very well scribed -- lovin' the way your skillz always shine!


    One :heart:
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Gypsy

    man heartfelt stuff and you've been bringing it so strong lately i've been trying to catch anything you write


    DSSNY
     
  6. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    peace all

    ...been havin trouble staying on the site today....havin' equip problems...so im gonna make this short
    much love to you all 4 the read
    N2 thanks 4 the challenge ...i love shh like this that try's our freestyle...Peace love

    G-man
     
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