Black Poetry : Situations

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  1. MzKwietStorm

    MzKwietStorm Member MEMBER

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    Listen to me and listen carefully
    Never doubt me and know that I love you unconditionally
    I know you just lost your job or rather, the job lost you
    And now you’re stressing and wondering what you’re going to do.
    I know you have rent to pay and I know you have mouths to feed
    But just trust and believe in me and I’ll make sure you get everything you need.
    I know everything about the man you let physically, emotionally, and mentally abuse you.
    Know, my child, that your body is a temple
    Put your faith in me and become the strong woman that you are
    And I promise I will show you true love and I will heal your broken heart.

    Young man, I know your situations and I’m not here to judge you
    But you need to think about things before you decide it’s something you want to do.
    I don’t care about your being in prison when you found me
    Because as long as you follow me, I’ll take you places and show you things you’ve never seen.

    I see you going to school, working, trying to maintain
    Wondering if this education is going to bring you any financial gain
    But be patient and you will soon see what life brings
    And remember, through me you can do great things.

    I know that there are many situations out there
    And remember no matter how bad it looks, I’m there and I do care
    You know how you sit at home, waiting for that special person to call
    That’s me, I’m sitting and waiting on your call
    I’m here, don’t hesitate to pick up the phone
    And when you hear my voice, know that you are not alone

    Remember, Prayer Changes​
     
  2. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These two stanzas hit me, thank you so much it was just the thing I needed to hear. It felt like you speaking directly to me.:hearts1: :thanks: :thanks:


     
  3. MzKwietStorm

    MzKwietStorm Member MEMBER

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    You're very welcome
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the beauty of this scribe how it just reach and embrace
     
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    love this powerful message here poet do flo on.:hearts2:
     
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