Black Poetry : Situations

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was a nippy day in the city
    Or at least in this brothas particular spot
    Situations in life has him frost bit
    Cant tell if he’s a has,
    Or Has not
    Thinking often on problems
    Brotha was feeling kinda low
    Time was standing still…for the most part
    Life situations wouldn’t give a ***** a blow
    Breather……….relief
    Whatever you like to call it
    Stressed out and Angry
    Drunk off chaos like and alcoholic
    Snags and sneers
    Hang ups
    My fears
    No one helping
    Only lending
    Laughs and Jeers
    People
    Society
    No one
    Really Cares
    Lifes
    Ups
    Down
    No
    Options
    Man made
    To bare……….
    Turmoil
    On this chest
    All night flights
    No rest
    Trapped inside
    Of Hells
    Best
    Keep pushing
    Or Give up
    Such a Tricky
    Test
    Answers
    Without Questions
    Chopped down
    No resurrection
    Able to stand
    But stand for what
    When looking for answers
    Only left with questions
    It was rumored that change
    Will come
    But that doesn’t seem the case
    When trying to force change
    I’ve ran a never ending race
    Running into closed doors
    Cant Tell
    If Im coming or going
    Anymore
    Often Wanna Die
    But Trying to kill myself
    May hurt more
    Then living this hetic life
    Agitated
    Lost
    Crippled in the Mind
    By Situations
    That’s stolen my Fight.
    Situations
    Situations
    Situations
    Never lived a word
    That defined so much meaning
    When irrational thoughts
    Have no answers
    Situations
    Gives the reasons
    Stealings
    Never an Answer
    Until situations says
    Your Poor
    Fighting never rational
    Until situations says
    You cant take anymore
    Livens never easy
    And so what if I think DIE
    Understand my situation
    Before you ask why!
    Situations.


    Lj
     
  2. LyricallyJacki

    LyricallyJacki Member MEMBER

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    :great: :great: :great: I could feel your pain as i read each line! I love this one, good job!
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes a man has to face his inner deamons and his emotions.. nice post poet.
     
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    Sometimes life's situations make ya wanna holla. Many have been here before, I know I have. I liked how you posed your flow poet.
     
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    i feel you with this one hope to see more of your work.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    things we face in life i was feeling all of this
     
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