Black Poetry : )))))Situations(((((

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Nov 4, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Situations...

    I cry endless rivers of self-loathing
    and burnished tears.
    They fall callously down my face,
    carving permanent etches of grief and cheek-stained
    sorrows.

    I move in retro-grade.
    I'm in the embrace of a man,
    feeling every inch of him in, around,
    and through me.
    I cry out at fever pitch and it consumes me.

    Situations...

    Echoes of reproaches brushed away.
    Too caught up in the building intensity of
    my body being stroked and rocked by 1000
    temptations.
    I quiver and sinful tastes so so so good.
    Its more than I should. I should have stopped.
    I'm confused, and feeling slightly put off.

    Situations...

    Copyright 2004
    ~Satin Prophesies
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow ! now this took me to a place i know so well
    your creation is awesome ......love this piece.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you papa for your love. I appreciate it greatly
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The situations that we find ourselves, being held within an uncertain embrace. Such deep flows, brotha. Continue...
     
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    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woah!!! a lotta talent you got flowin there, well written and interesting insight on situations. would've loved to hear this on audio!!!

    mos definitely feelin this drop!
    much love. :dj:
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much darling for your love and support! God bless
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Plain, thank you so much for your love and Welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Blessings and peace.