Black Poetry : situations

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Aug 27, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    situations
    fights
    and disagreements...
    dont come first nor do i came in last...
    rolling around with your boys never
    really thinking on spending time
    yelling acting crazy when my only
    concern is to know your ok...
    friends we are in so many ways
    jail and court there in heart but at
    times its not enough for you holding
    hands dancing in the rain
    times we shared that wasnt all bad
    but good enough to not want me first
    not understanding not even thinking
    talking and planning hoping and wishing
    pray and cry but still not good enough...
    a freind a lover and a mate i know it is not
    with you
    your who you are and i am who i am not good
    enough caring is in my heart loving is all
    i know when i try i am still wrong...as the
    color of the rainbow some light some bold
    and i will never see over that rain bow i know this now....sometimes i dont know
    if i should move on or stick with you...
    my heart is full of love awaiting for that
    one to take hold and open it up to a whole
    new world something we as friends lovers
    can share leaving nothing out
    a house in the park with 4.5 rooms
    and all we ever dreamed about with
    that truck for me and your motorcyle
    you dare dream about....with our kids and
    the one we made....
    in a song you forgot to be my lover so many
    things you want to do that you dont have
    enough time in the day
    to spend with the one who loved you
    :cool:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh:)
    this is nice
    smooth
    very nice indeed
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I really love the flow in this scribe here
    yo pen moving smoothly
    nice
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa u sho R on a roll...scribe on poet :)
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    triniti424..now i be late :lol:
    thanks for the love and support on dis...
    Angel
     
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    situations...

    how 2 live thru them & still be...

    Very nice.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey sis, this is dope! glad you dug this one up on yourself.
     
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