Black Poetry : Sitting On A Barbed Wire Fence

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  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u ain't never lying , sometime this be me until i recollect myself
     
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    Sometimes a person can be up against it, so close to the edge, that's when one has to hold on just a little bit longer, keeping one's wits about them. I hear ya on this.
     
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    feel the luv

    my equal.......

    this is hott......
     
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    "Street" I like where you've taken this; taking us along for the ride.

    Your style emerging out of GREATNESS

    Go with the flow!
     
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    i understand this so well. great write.
     
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    whew!!!

    maaan, street, only if you knew how a brova be feelin'. this write describes my feelings on a lot of days. the flow was immaculate. the message and feeling was portrayed so vivid. this is, hands down, one of your top three joints. i can feel the tension. this is coming from a mind that needs an outlet (basketball, rapping, writing, bowling, swimming, skating, dating, boxing, etc.) i bet you felt ten times better after you wrote this one, i know!

    p.s my cd is coming along. i plan on dropping it real soon. by the way, i'll be in queens around april 27th, i need your contacts. peace, fam
     
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    You are truly Da Street Vessel
     
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    Sitting on a barbed wire fence aint NO joke...OUCH! LOL! But sometimes we have to suck it up and endure the pain...for just a little while! Great flow DSS!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    thank you

    so much bro. $$$RICH$$$ - i knew you would feel me

    thanks so much Sista Watz you are so right we need to stay focus

    Miss Lady - thank you for your comment

    1POET - i thank you so much for your comment it was extremely kind

    and appreciated

    LGO - yes i think we all could feel this, anyone who has passion that is

    lol

    Sha'iyn - i glad you felt me, your comment was great, i look forward to your CD
    and get at me if in NY i can do any of the five boroughs ok , l lied
    i don't like staten island lol

    PLAT - thank you sweetie you are so kind
     
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