Quiet Poetry Lounge : Sitting Here

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Oct 2, 2002.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Sitting here late at night
    after a day of struggle & fight
    my mind take me on a journey
    of everlasting thought

    Inside my quiet moments
    to dis letter i scribe
    a line of love
    and a line of heart
    yet in the middle
    a blind space took place
    my pen seem to have
    went blank

    So i take my self back a space
    trying to trace da feelings
    thats so dem and dark
    only in a upward light
    i see my brightest star
    inside the sparkle
    is a woman
    she smile yet speak
    she watch gracefully
    to my left is a child
    dressed in white
    a magical glow circle his head
    i become alone
    this letter lay here undone
    da story yet to unfold
    so i continue my write
    and whisper dear GOD
    goodnight
    headed for bed .........wit prayer
    until tomorrow as da morning light
    shine upon dis face
    my pen lay still
    the paper of dis letter stained
    another tear got away !
    while i was sitting here
    in dis very moment of tyme ...
     
  2. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww hun...i know that feeling all to well!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed we can fine self lost in tyme of thoughts
    and things going blank......but GOD'S angels watch
    ova ya continuely
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thanks cindy my sweet chick !!
     
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    This is really beautiful it brings tears to my eyes. Such a sweet and gentle heart, women who pray for the gentleness of great love. The blackman the source of great love.
     
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    yes ASHANTA da gentleness of love grasp large in da heart
    Thankz sis..
     
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    i love this
    it was so touchin
    in thought...
     
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    Thank u it was da emotions flowin within
     
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    SO I JUST SIT HERE IN DA MOMENT OF TYME
     
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    $$RICH$$ this is so beautiful!!!! I'm so glad this got brought around so I could have the pleasure of reading it. :)
     
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