Black Poetry : Sitting here wondering

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just sitting here wondering...
    If I've become a part of your hopes and dreams
    Even though, I dont have the loot to buy you golden rings
    I've only got my heart and assistance when you cant cope with things
    Maybe it will never happen, maybe it just floats along with wings

    Wondering...
    If I'll ever see the day
    When we dont fight anymore, love will lead the way
    When we never indulge in jealously, greed, and hate
    When I dont wanna see you go and you need me to stay

    Wondering...
    If my name is always on the tip of your tongue
    If this "like" will ever shift into "love"
    If I'll ever endure this gift from above
    I know I might fail, but I'd rather risk it than run

    Wondering...
    If your heart will ever accept who I am
    Cuz neglect is something you should never do to a friend
    I know many want you, but I refuse to lose you to them
    And if I mess up, would you ever choose me again...?

    Wondering...
    Would you walk away if the skies turn to grey
    Would it be easy? Would you determine us that way?
    But I know love is a lesson, so I gotta learn it someday
    I know I gotta prove it to you, earn my keep, and earn my stay

    But I was just wondering...
    Thats all, just wondering...
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: IT! Your poetry is so real. I'm feelin this, I just wanted to keep reading and reading...
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks, i wanted to keep writing and writing but my head was out of thought...lol
     
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    Would you walk away if the skies turn to grey
    Would it be easy? Would you determine us that way?
    But I know love is a lesson, so I gotta learn it someday
    I know I gotta prove it to you, earn my keep, and earn my stay


    This stanza, in particular, is off the chain. Lovely.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!
    i truely love ya flava of flow
    this was off da hook .....mo mo !!
     
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    this was pulling at the heart.......
    I know these feelings...wondering
    what they truly feel, always wondering
    waiting

    feeling ur feelings
     
  7. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall...
     
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    you are
    indeed
    a romantic
    nice feeling
    wonderful vibes
    loving your flow
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Bluewater...
     
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    i enjoyed reading
    nice flow
     
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