Black Poetry : SIT BACK AND BREATH WITH ME

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  1. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sistah, my sistah,
    "Sit back and breath with me"
    For all is just an illusion
    Can't you see.

    Let no man destroy your joy
    For it is just a mere ego
    That the devil is letting go
    To toy with your emotions
    On the down low.

    I've been there to many times
    Causing myself to faulter in sin
    Always being the one that have to pray
    For the trials that came my way.

    I'm here for you if you let me
    Breath with you, while going through.
    So you go on and have a good day
    And don't let the devil put you on display.

    I know the adversary got you on the run
    But remember he's doing this just for fun,
    So "Sit back and breath with me"
    And let Jesus destroy the enemy.


    Your brother in Christ Jesus
    Our Lord and personal Saviour

    :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow............I love the inspiration in this piece
    as I'm sitting, reading and "breathing" the
    essence of Mr. Metree

    this was very encouraging...
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed this read.....
     
  4. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK U ALL FOR THE LUV...SMILE
     
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    Well Done and Welcome to Destee!

    It's always good to know where the source of all power is and it's beautiful to see those who articulate it in their art...
    You are in the right place!
    Welcome to Destee!
    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  6. MORE

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    :hot: :hot: praise God, this was great...liked it......:kiss:
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i loved this...what a sweet inspirational piece. much love
     
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    tyte, tyte, TYTE!
     
  9. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank U for the luv sistah's and brutha's...I feel the warmth in this room...I will continue to write to influence a certain style that even u never thought of...so sit back and relax for some more.
    I love to write to make the mind wander.
     
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