Black Poetry : SIT~AND~WONDER

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  1. 4g0tt3n_Canc3r

    4g0tt3n_Canc3r Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some times i just sit and wonder
    wonder about
    life-
    will it get better
    love-
    will i ever
    family-
    how i love them
    violence-
    will it all end
    money-
    is it worth it
    people-
    no ones perfect
    truth-
    its definition
    poetry-
    my own rendition
    failure-
    truly scares me
    crying-
    which i do rarely
    thoughts-
    where they originate
    images-
    that people imitate

    i just sit and wonder.......
     
  2. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really like this piece poet. So many things to wonder about in day at any given time...it's a wonder how the mind deals with it all. Good job!
     
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    The wonders of the world... I loved the pace of this, and how you posed what many have on their minds. Probably sounds great spoken. Much enjoyed!
     
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    makes a mind wonder and think ...love the drop
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perfect words and flow to make one...SIT~AND~WONDER
    You’re a brilliant poet and versifier