Black Poetry : SISTERS PAIN: A poem by Tdogg

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  1. tdogg

    tdogg Active Member MEMBER

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    SISTERS PAIN

    Time and time again I heard your cries
    Crying every time she told them lies
    Wanting us to feel her pain and misery
    When all she wanted was a little sypmathy!

    Complaining tellin me she wants a happy home
    I had to remind her at least she's not alone
    You know what I'm talking about
    The way she used to say "he put me out!"

    All her sorrows laying planted in my head
    Why should I care its her fault she made that bed
    "He talked about me in front of my friends"
    Well forgive him he's only human you understand!

    "Hello, police, he put his hands on me he's never done
    that before!"
    Well girl don't call them unless he hits you once more
    "Listen, I saw him with another woman today"
    If you wanna keep your man you gotta let him stray.

    "Hey girl I just wanted to let you know I got rid of that man
    Yes, I took all you advice until he me across the head with
    a frying pan!
    You know I thought you understood I thought you had my back,
    but all alone it was you who needed my pains to gain respect!"

    "Don't feel bad girl I know its not our way to tell other our shame,
    but don't forget its by sharing with our sister that strength we'll
    gain!
    And don't be crying alone come and get this love
    God's not stingy there's plenty for all more than enough!"

    Sisters jealousy and pride steals the love and keeps us blind
    crushes the tide and destroys the voice that links our mind.

    And when you get home and troubles knock at your door
    Turn aside falling crying out his name as you kneel to the floor
    for to us he is a stronghold and a power to the weak
    and in his hand my sister we must always keep.
     
  2. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *wipes tears from face*................ This piece was right on the spot......... keep these flos coming........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt this here deeply ....very much on target here
    feeling da painful tear of sisters
     
  4. tdogg

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    Thank again $Rich$ and Da1whoonwnlifes I value your comments and support but I would really like to see some of your work so please posts me and let me know so I can also be of encouragement to you. Signed Tdogg





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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sure stroll down and you will fine pages of my work
    and how i flow
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed this
    feelin it
     
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    wow brah this was spine-tingling-bone-chillin-powerful :)
     
  8. tdogg

    tdogg Active Member MEMBER

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    Angel I love the way u express your insight on life to read your poetry is an awakening of the soul keep on sharing. Signed Tdogg
     
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    real nice flow
    the links of mind
    i like that
    Peace
     
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    Woah! I think I felt that a little too much. Dang, that was a painful reality. It seems that, that same stuff happens in my neighborhood all the time. And the saddest thing about they are so quick to forgive. I was feelin it. Tyte flow.

    Much Luv,
    Foxy............
     
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