Black Poetry : Sisters Are Unbelievable

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dedicated
    To all my sisters
    May my words indulge your mind
    As you have mine for so many years
    I Love You Sisters

    My attraction to your soul
    Is quite remarkable/I uplift your spirit
    I relax your mind/Incorporate living with me
    Just to show you/Your all mine
    Smear so many images/Take so many pictures
    Beauty so imperical/Lovely your a Goddess
    Drapped in Loui & Chanel/The best make me yell
    Screamin-"I Have Feel In Love" "YEAH"
    Brothers do you know how this feels
    To have a woman that moves you
    Hear her voice it soothes you
    I can prove it too/The magic of a Black Woman
    She can prove it too/With her independent ways
    Her education that paves the way/She is C.E.O. now
    I thought there wouldnt be a day/They voting with me
    This the american way/Sister stay in front of that bus
    A black queen paved that way/Gave us that right
    A moment of silence as I pray/Sisters your unbelivable
    Quite remarkable/So phenominal/No more obsticals
    Do thee impossible/Your so gifted/Quite uplifted/
    Brings me harmony/Its so hard too see/Past your everything
    Your my everything....
    Unbelievable to everything you do and say
    Give me chills to think of you this way
    Goosebumps when its you my laday
    How can I ever look at another when your everything
    A black king could want in his life
    No more drama/You make my life right
    You make life right to the point/That everything else just doesnt exsist
    You are a gift from God/Brothers Imagine This Queen
    Sisters Are Unbelieveable
    (PAUSE)
    Sisters I need you!!

    Sincerly,
    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
  2. karmashines

    karmashines Banned MEMBER

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    Another good poem. Thanks, Tantrum.
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your welcome Karmashines
    Much love 2 You
    Im glad you liked it
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great poem!:kiss1:
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Sister Cursed
    I am glad you liked it
    I try to show woman
    They are more than just sex and looks
    There minds and essence uplift me
    Much love Sister
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tant who are you kidding your no lady loves no l.l. i need love kind of guy. just kidding ba love the flo flow on tant.
     
  7. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Haha Sister Nevar
    You know everyone has that side
    Its if there ready to come to grips
    Show it and mean it
    Much Love Sister
     
  8. GrandHustle

    GrandHustle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great Piece Poet.
     
  9. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank Yo Brother Grand
    I just thought the Sisters
    need love shown 24/7
    They are a an inspiration to us all
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhh........

    Tantrum...Tantrum....Tantrum.... this is AWSOME...WOW.. thank you so much for showin us sistas LOVE! WOW.. just beatuful...
     
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