Black Poetry : Sister...

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  1. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A little something for my sister, upon her 'upcoming' birthday (it, truly, does her no justice)...


    We've endured as one being,
    in the midst of chaos,
    and you have lifted me up;
    carrying me, from our beginning-
    through thick and thin-
    my feet haven't 'touched the ground', since,
    sister...
    I've watched you mature;
    realizing that, with each passing day,
    I strive to obtain, even, the smallest dosage
    of your excellence,
    sister...
    You remain, incessantly,
    my greatest inspiration,
    sister...
    As, you have been through,
    physical, and emotional trauma, and still manage to exude
    large amounts of consideration,
    sister...
    On, this,
    your day of birth,
    I will cry for you,
    sister...
    Come the apocalypse,
    you'll be hoisted from the midst of the fire and,
    gladly,
    I will die for you,
    sister...
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maple

    You scribed your syrup today and I know your sister will love this 'peace' of poetic love.

    *pancakes*
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MAPLE....

    now this is love!!... i'm gonna call my
    sister as soon as i get home from work &
    read this to her!!... I'm Serious!!...
    it's not her birthday... but she'll get
    the message!! :)

    thanks for sharing... it is beautifully written!!

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  4. Nita

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    What a way to show your love...lovin this Maple
     
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    did you show

    you sista this
    i think it does her alot of justice

    and tell her happy birthday from me too


    Peace from your neighbor

    interstate 95
    GWB
     
  6. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter- Thank you, very much, for your words of encouragement, scribe; they mean a lot. You keep up ya scribin' for the world to see...:D


    Sunshyne- My sister in verse- I'm glad you felt me on this one, and I, truly, hope your sister enjoys the gesture. This one comes, straight, from the :heart:...


    Nita-Extreme thanx to you from the maple one, for the show of support. The luv is appreciated, sis...:jumping:


    Dat real So'ja- Thanx for read, scribe. You know your presence is, deeply, felt. And, she will see it soon, enough...
     
  7. alyce

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    ohhhhh,

    THIS is exquisite love!!!!!!

    Thank you for this beautiful, beautiful scribe!

    Maply Xtracted, of course!

    ahhhhhhhhh!

    A

    :heart:
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maple...

    Look at ya!!! Just "xtractin" all ova the place!!!

    Nice sap sistah!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  9. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *feelin' the love*

    Ms. A- You know, it is an, extreme, honor to receive your words of encouragement, mama. Truly. I'm a fan of yours, sis :D...


    GQ (a.k.a. my favoritest flirt in the whole wide world)- You know I gotta xtract for you, pa :lovestruc...
     
  10. 8th wonder

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    Oh girl... This was deeply felt... oh so beautiful..

    think i'll call my sister and tell her i love her...

    8th!
     
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