Black Poetry : Sister Sister Its Alright

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  1. SHAKA ZULU

    SHAKA ZULU Member MEMBER

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    SISTER SISTER WHY MRS LADY DID YOU FALL?BACK IN THE DAY YOU STOOD PROUD AND TALL.IN THE NIGHT SOMEONE SPECIAL HELD YOU TIGHT.BUT BOO KNOW ITS ALRIGHT;LIFE BEEN PRETTY TOUGH YOUR BABY TAKEN AWAY NOW YOU WALK THE STREETS FROM DAY TO DAY.NOONE GIVES YOU RESPECT,BUT KNOW MRS.LADY ITS GOING TOBE OK.THE PIMPS THE PUSHERS THEY ALL FALL;DOMESTIC VIOLANCE AINT NEW; JUST REMEMBER GOD WILL SEE YOU THROUGH.DONT FALL TO THE DANGERS THAT SURROUNDS YOU.LIKE THE QUEENS BEFORE YOU CLAIM YOUR THRONE.LET EM KNOW YOURE STRONG.THE HELP YOU SEEK IS FROM WITHIN AND IN YOUR HEART AND MIND YOU WILL WIN.DEFY THE ODDS AND MAKE A JOYFUL NOISE AND ALL SHALL BE AND BELIEVE IN THE HEAVENLY FATHER AND YOUR ANGUISH SHALL BE SET FREE.;)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    say it loud & clear so one's ear my hear !
    dis flow runs smoothly keep dropping the vibe
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Encouraging words for a weary soul.

    Nice...very nice.
     
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    talk about inspirational. love reading uplifting poems. thanks!
     
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    Yeah...that's right...

    Shaka,

    Had to check out your floetry...

    It's like that!!!

    Enjoyed the read!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    yup

    my only prob is the structure of the poem more like a paragraph than a poem, but hey whatever works for u

    nice job shaka
     
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    I agree with lonely
    great topic and poem
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yepper...

    i feel that i just might hafa print this and give it to someone...we could all use it...
     
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    And a man who has compassion shall be called a King among men!

    Might has been said to make right, but often it makes the weak take flight. Compassion when weiled has the power of the healed, and let the healing begin...thanks for this thought provoking piece/peace...My Brother/King!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    Why this was nice!
     
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