Quiet Poetry Lounge : Sister Moon

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by abstract219, Jun 14, 2006.

  1. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    .....At once I take your hand...and sing...
    "And you and I cross from the city to the valley
    and you and I find reasons..
    to talk..."

    at this lovely moonlit stream
    here we will find comfort.
    away from everyday concerns...
    please, sit and relax, rest your soul.

    ever notice how, at twilight
    near a calm and clear lake..
    your pulse, just slows down?

    Sister Moon, I just wanted to talk to you..
    Away from the corner,
    and it's unbalanced egos..
    and sirens of never-ending stress..
    Away from the city and its
    over ambitious drives...

    Here, in another one of
    God's great performances we sit...
    Where crickets play the melodies of Earth
    and moonbeams dance...
    thru the shade of plum trees...

    It's quiet now...
    Leaves rustle about
    as if they are applauding
    the arrival of the wind...
    a leaf drops into the stream
    and circles radiate outward...

    Sister Moon
    It's moments like this
    I want to share with you...
    beyond all modern appliances...
    beyond all intrusion
    of obnoxious forces...

    Nothing between us...
    A love supreme
    at one before Nature...
    All complete in the sight of God...

    Where you and I cross
    from valley to valley...
    where you and I find our way back..
    to Love.


    (c)2005 intercontinental abstractions...all rights reserved
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The imagery in this captured me and whisked me to a peaceful paradise, and I enjoyed the trek, poet. How beautiful. Flow on poet of the week!!!!
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I knew it...

    You have that gift. Please keep blessing us these beautiful scribes.
    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesomely well done , this just took me cross a maze painted sweet.
     
  5. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    surrounded by the simplistic complexities of nature and the Moon... life sure is beautiful...

    hey i don't think you can get poet of the week two weeks in a row... slow down poet... and pass some of that shine on.. you seem to be in abundance... lol...

    as always abstract... i loved it... flow on poet
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :book: wauw .....

    beautifull.....













    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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